A positive comment
More accessible terminology and some clarification of the relationship between abstract concepts will help the understanding of these ideas and their spreading to a more general, non-specialized public.
I believe this idea is important so to help spread the Systemic Innovation and Thrivability ideas. The current theoretical framework, rooted in systems sicences and related to the works of important people from the last half of the XX century (Bush, Engelbart, Jantch, Peccei), may be difficult to grasp for newcomers who (regrettably) know little about these persons, their contributions and their time.